jtersteege 0 Posted April 21, 2008 My first portrait.Let me know what you think? Comments & critiques are apreciated. Thanks in advance, regards Jaap. Link to comment
wolfgangarnold 142 Posted April 21, 2008 I like the composition and the mirroring in the sunglasses - it put's the guy very nice into context. Two suggestions: first, the background is - though quite blurred already - still too disturbed (I know, hard to influence in the situation), when postprocessing, you might try blurring and reducing contrast. Second: he's a tough guy, that could be emphazised by stronger contrast in his face (his wrinkles lack a little sharpness unfortunately).Regardless of my picky comments: cool shot! Link to comment
jtersteege 0 Posted April 22, 2008 Wolfgang, thanks for your comment and suggestions.I was scared that boosting up the sharpeness in his face would have a negative effect on the scarf he wears. My postprocessing skills are rather still underdeveloped I must say. Thanks again,comments en suggestions as these are helping me. Regards, Jaap. Link to comment
gerhardt 0 Posted May 11, 2008 This is an engaging portrait in B&W the reflection in the glasses an added bonus.. YOu have done well with the available light. Link to comment
toloduran 0 Posted May 28, 2008 Magnifico retrato.Estupendo encuadre,con una excelente luz y b&w.asi como unos interesantes reflejos en el cristal de las gafas. Saludos -Tolo. Link to comment
BobSandford 0 Posted May 8, 2010 you ps out the one nose hair for him... i agree that it's unfortunate that there isn't more detail to his face - this would strengthen the theme. i like the concept and the composition. Link to comment
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