In the Grass (retouched)

All critiques are welcome.

Slightly better result but still the same problem (IMHO). If this is your daughter try doing another session and this time use flash to fill in.

Beautiful little girl. The highlight is really effective. I think, with a softer background this picture will be more revealing. High contrast of the background is a little bit distracting to me. Best regards.

Thanks for the tips and comments. Much appreciated.