martin.degiorgio 0 Posted February 22, 2008 I Would like to have some critiques on this photo to help me improve my work please . Thanks Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted February 22, 2008 Looks pretty good to me. Maybe you could have used a different background... Link to comment
michaelging 1 Posted February 22, 2008 Caspar is correct, the lighting is beautiful , but the burlap does not seem to go with the fruit. I would also darken down the upper right hand corner a little . thanks for sharing the photo. Link to comment
creative art and photograp 0 Posted February 22, 2008 Very nice. I'm at a loss for anything to add! Splash a bit of water on them to show some droplets?? I like the burlap texture in the background, keeps the scene from "floating away" in the darkness! Link to comment
charlieboy007 0 Posted February 22, 2008 Wow Wow Martin this one is Excellent...WELL DONE Link to comment
tomasz_wojciechowski 0 Posted February 22, 2008 I am sorry to say that but it is not very original - there have been a few posts of the same sort recently on photo net and at least for me, of a better kind. For a start, the contrasts and lighting in your picture could be improved, i.e. more dramatic. Also the backround, although properly picked, reminds me of several posts before. I hope you don't mind my critique - I would just like to encourage you to experiment with something that has not been explored. cheers,Tomasz Link to comment
morophaenixmau 22 Posted February 22, 2008 A very good shot!...also I love still-life with fruits and vegetables!...Ciaomau! Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted February 23, 2008 It makes me hungry for a snack. I agree with Mike, my eye is drawn to that corner rather than focusing on the fruit regardless of what the background is. Link to comment
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