Jump to content

Let's toast to the health, happiness and future of you all.


laurent-paul

From the category:

Portrait

· 170,140 images
  • 170,140 images
  • 582,352 image comments


Recommended Comments

It is a great portrait.

 

I might tone down his left hand a bit. It seems to pull my eye away from his marvelous face.

Link to comment

Thank you very much for your time.

 

As for the hand ... When I asked the gentleman if he would agree to pose for a photo, I asked him to be himself and not to look in the camera. I took the shot, and I thanks him. After that is when he offered a toast, and my camera not beeing to close to my eye anymore, I shot a second picture. This one.

 

The first idea was for me to actually close up more on the face, but then I discovered that this shot was the best of the two, and the most interesting. Unfortunately we didn't spoke much and I don't know anything from him. His face and his eyes really are speaking a lot, but looking at the shot when on post, I noticed the hand which looks like a statement, the ring especially beeing an important part of the story, and I think it that its attraction is for me what makes the photo even more powerfull.

Link to comment

Yes Laurent this is a fine picture, and then dot. But,,the person is too much

aware,,U have made him to an actor. H. C.-Bresson,,rue Mouffetard,,The boy with two bottles,,,that is maybe a half-setup,,but probably shot seconds before the

boy realized that now he is an actor,,(or in the very moment),,more than just himself,,the idendity remains,,,the accidental/coincidence of life talks,,in capitals,,, re niels

Link to comment

Thank you very much for your feedback, and yes I undertand perfectly what you are saying.

 

But the fact is, that it is in a way an unexpected photo. As I explained just above, the first shot, which is the one I was really thinking about, actually "look" more "accidental".

 

But then, It is after I gave a little fee to the gentleman for his time as a model, that he offered me a toast, and this is when I took this second photo, which was unexpected by both of us, and comparing the two, not only did I find this one more powerfull ( seen larger, I just personaly can't help but look in his eyes for a long time ), but it feels, for me at least, that the man really is offering this toast to us all, not only just my little self.

 

I may upload the first photo if one day I feel like it, eventhough I usually am more of a "one shot" guy.

 

 

Link to comment
Congratulations, this portrait really tells something.

Good composition and toning.

Link to comment

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...