sepia portraits Untitled

I like the pose but would have male bring right arm back just a little to make the shoulders apear stright. and hide his ohter hand behind her she now has fingers growing out of her hip

maybe rasie her chin slightly so both subjects appear to be looking at same focal point. overall great idea wonderful shot but possibility of the perfect print with just minor adjustments.

Keep up the great work.

Danny

 

I like it overall. Her right arm (our left) seems to be in an awkward position. I agree with last comment that they need same focal point and their chins up a bit. Nice going overall and keep up the good work.

OK i will submit a few more....lol.

This shot works for me. I like the tone and such. great job.

 

Now this shot I like a lot Jenny. It is hard to believe that this si the same woman from the other image. Here, she shows all the personality and attitude that is missing in the other. The combination with the guys works great. Just a little dark around his head, but its probably not like that in the print. Excellent work.

Nice pose, good light, interesting backdrop. Here again cropping in on the couples face's will give you a total different feel and photo. Good Job.

V.Bice

The sepia tone really lifts this shot. The models look good together although its not reallt clear why her shorts would be undone. She looks like she is about to go for a swim but he isn't. Otherwise its a very strong image .

Actually... Jeff mentioned the only complaint I had about the pose... the shorts just seem contrived, or it might be the hand over them that seems odd. Other than that it's a well posed... posed image. And the sepia works well here. Nice one ;)

 

PS> Keep submitting... or I'll feel even more guilty for not ;) besides... well... just keep it up :)