Van

Steve

I am a little new to potraits and learning a lot. I think this is a fantastic shot and a lot of thought went into it. However, I feel thet the persons head is hanging in the air. May I suggest you add minute detail of his jacket, just the buttons or so.. just a feeling.

Wel done

Antonius

Thank you for you remarks Antonius. I tried to bring out some of his shirt but it was too dark. I think I'll try again and see what I can come up with.

Steve McArthr