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Any constructive comments, good or bad, would be appreciated. We all

aim to improve.

 

Many thanks,

 

Kevin

Very nicely done Kevin, the tonalities are wonderful. My compliments

 

Bill

The exposure, lighting and tonality are very good. There are a few small things I might change, however. 1) I'd rotate her torso slightly so that her shoulders aren't "squared" straight on to the camera. Turning her slightly should have a slenderizing effect and make her shoulders look a little less masculine. 2) For similar reasons, I'd turn her wrist... slightly. 3) I'd have her reposition her fingers. The way she's holding her fingers in this photo make her look like she's biting her nails. This, combined with her upward glance make her look like she's worried about something. However, that doesn't seem to be what you're after. I think if her middle and index fingers were extended a little, she'd look more contemplative. That should also add more graceful lines to her hand. Beautiful model... I hope you get to work with her more. Best wishes. -Michael

1.cropped tighter 2.adjusted shadows/midtones/highlights