kirk d 0 Posted November 9, 2007 This is one of several shots I took of a man who allegedly broke into a nearby home and was chased on foot by the police to this spot where he got on top of the guardrail - to do what, I don't know. He was coaxed down eventually. I thought his position with his hands behind his back and the hangman looking light post says he is guilty before proven innocent. I may revisit this and try for a better B&W, wanted to get your ideas on the composition. What do you think? Link to comment
mikecash 0 Posted November 9, 2007 This would be a photojournalists dream catch. In terms of composition, the vertical lines and the curve of the bridge just draw you to the subject, nice. I would probably like a full view of the cop car but It's not that important (plus would detract from the alignment of the lamp posts. I just love this pic though. Link to comment
jeffl7 0 Posted November 9, 2007 This makes me sad. I imagine all the many "frames" in this man's life that led to this point. There is a whole history compressed into this one shot. Incredible. Link to comment
kirk d 0 Posted November 9, 2007 Thanks fellas. Michael, my original version of this, I cropped out of a larger composition and it did include the entire car as well as the entire lamp post on the left. It is a good composition and very fine, I still have it but when I cropped it further to get this, I felt the strength from the emphasis on the man and the illusion of the lamp post being like a hang man's post. I appreciate your honest comment tremendously. Jeff, I knew you were more sentimental than me. You revealed more of this than I thought about but I'll tell you, the people being held up on their commute home suspecting this guy commited a burglary were actually talking about it being best if he would just jump so traffic could flow again! Don't know if anyone was shouting it to him but I wouldn't put it past already road raged commuters. Kirk Link to comment
Emmanuel Enyinwa 0 Posted November 9, 2007 This is quite an aesthetic achievement, a "dream", as the other commenter said. The way you handled the presentation is ingenious, the elongated, vertical composition gives it a somewhat unreal rendition, not unlike a re-enactment one sees on tv, yet your words more than restore that impression on the viewer that what he sees is no fiction. This picture actually is my favorite of all your photos, and well worth a 7/7 should you ever decide to post it for numbers. Congrats on an exceptional image, and I do not use that term lightly. Link to comment
andrea allison 0 Posted November 10, 2007 Wow! The B/W really gives to the drama kirk, as well as your crop, giving to a superb composition. Kindest Regards Andrea Link to comment
mvisionphotography 1 Posted November 26, 2007 I thought "OH NO" don't jump! This is an excellent "STORY" picture. I love the way you captured it and love the long crop! Link to comment
kirk d 0 Posted November 26, 2007 Thanks Micki, your sentiments weren't shared by the people on the ground who were saying he should just jump so the traffic could resume - I don't think they knew what they were asking for. I really didn't want to hang around to find out but not long after this shot, I passed and traffic was flowing and there were no ambulances picking up pieces so I assume he didn't jump; also, there was no mention on the evening news of anyone jumping. Kirk Link to comment
mary_corning 0 Posted December 5, 2007 This is so full of ideal aspects I am not sure where to start. I love the repeated shape of the man and the light post. The angles of stair steps above the police car. The absence of authority comes to mind as well as many other reactions and emotions. This is what photography is at its best... a story teller without the luxury of words. I would like to see perhaps a fill of color in one spot or another. Though being PS illiterate I have no idea of the process to achieve such a thing. Anyway I am so glad I stopped by. What a fun journey through some of your images. Thank you Kirk. I'll have to come by more often. Sincerely, ~Mary~ Link to comment
tonmestrom 4 Posted March 25, 2008 very good wotk. Could use a bit more contrast though Link to comment
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