sashalit 0 Posted November 3, 2007 it's like you almost cant tell what it is... except no, its really obvious! does that make sense? in any case i really like the focus and the soft light etc.... Link to comment
maddox 0 Posted November 3, 2007 Mike, I think the concept of this shot has some potential, but the idea needs to be developed more. Generally speaking, I like shallow depth-of-field in photographs, but perhaps this dof is just TOO shallow. Also, the triangular shape and the blurred diagonal line in the background are very distracting. Perhaps you could try re-shooting under more balanced light, with greater dof. Link to comment
michael_whitney 0 Posted November 4, 2007 I want to like this image but I think Michaels correct that the dark wedge in the background is distracting and open up about a stop. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted November 4, 2007 I think you got something going on Hair.I like what you starting to do,keep going Link to comment
William Michael 2,286 Posted November 17, 2007 Both the concept and the image are ruined by the two OoF (dark and light) triangles in the background AND the CV (camera viewpoint) which renders an intrusive rectangular `chunk` of grey in the foreground. WW Link to comment
clik2media 0 Posted November 18, 2007 Please review the color version the clarify the "triangle". All your comments are very much appreciated. Michael Link to comment
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