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Pls comment - thnx

it's like you almost cant tell what it is... except no, its really obvious! does that make sense?

in any case i really like the focus and the soft light etc....

Mike, I think the concept of this shot has some potential, but the idea needs to be developed more. Generally speaking, I like shallow depth-of-field in photographs, but perhaps this dof is just TOO shallow. Also, the triangular shape and the blurred diagonal line in the background are very distracting. Perhaps you could try re-shooting under more balanced light, with greater dof.

I want to like this image but I think Michaels correct that the dark wedge in the background is distracting and open up about a stop.

I think you got something going on Hair.I like what you starting to do,keep going

 

 

Both the concept and the image are ruined by the two OoF (dark and light) triangles in the background AND the CV (camera viewpoint) which renders an intrusive rectangular `chunk` of grey in the foreground.

 

WW

 

Please review the color version the clarify the "triangle". All your comments are very much appreciated.

Michael