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Hot! Hot! Hot! (The picture ain't bad either). Just Kidding. Awesome highlights. Beautiful detail. Perfect exposure.

A great exposure. The model is very beautiful, specially her lips are ultra attractive evocating the Shofia Loren. Although flash light on her face is a little exaggerated yet it did not lessen any thing. However it is a great portrait. Thanks for sharing.

The model's face, lips, and eyes are instant grabbers...beautiful, piercing, perfect. The lighting is perfect as well. But, the open lips reveal teeth which appear irregular, shattering the illusion of the perfect face. Loose single strands of hair on the face need retouchng and hair on lower right side of face appears abruptly chopped. For fashion, these are obvious flaws. If the image is solely intended to be provocatic and sexy, they probably are not important enough to correct. I suppose it all depends on the photographer's intended marketing strategy. Still, very nice work.

you did hit on one aspect of this photo. first, it is a portrait, not a fashion shot.

 

the stray hair is annoying, but i didn't find it enough of a distraction to zap out. i may do so at a later date ;=)

 

i actually have a tighter crop 4:5, that eliminates the shoulder, but mistakenly posted the 2:3

 

 

Hi Dave! You really did a great job!!! Great lighting, perfect focus and the viewer can't take its eyes off it...!!You also had the chance to make pictures with an extremely beautiful model, she seems very professional!!Perfect look! Congratulations to you and the model!!!I love it! Greetings, juergen

Excellent lighting, lovely colours and as for the composition, I am humbled!

:)Gorm

Very good capture of light and composition! Congrats.