sales team Sales Team Photo

The idea here was to show the group but also include the Mercedes that

they receive as a perk. Please comment.

To me the tree is distracting. I wonder if you could have moved to your right and shot with more open sky as a back ground.

Kellen,

 

The photo is nice for a keepsake for staff/co-workers. The trees and the poles are distracting, also you have lost one of the people in the back. A better setting might be the vehicles in a semicircle and the group in front with a open sky back ground.

Look at all there toes. Every one of them has got their toes in perfect order. I say crop everything and just leave their toes. He He!

 

I'm sitting here ready to write something and there are just adorable, wonderful, colorful, toes. AND, I don't even HAVE the foot fetish BUT I think those are some really cool looking shoes. ;)~

 

Aren't you glad this shoot is over ;) ~ one down and thousands more to go!! ;)

I'm not going to comment on the trees and the pole because lets face it - you had to shoot where the cars are and maybe this was the best angle. I think it's a decent job - my only nitpick being the one fellow in the back got missed. Yah - the feet are funny!

"my only nitpick being the one fellow in the back got missed."

 

One fellow? Why heck, it was the only fellah in the shot. Is this some sort of sexist plot to erase men off the sales landscape. :)

 

Nice sales team and congrats on the perks.

 

"Photographer's Request for Critique"

 

One might go to editorial mags and check out how they layout/grab shots of this kind as unfortunately, the shot does neither the group or the perks justice. Not trying to be overly harsh in my following as other than the photo being a group shot of folks you know (Could have been a college class reunion shot, before lunch.) it says nothing to the uninitiated. There's no energy considering the perk they just received and the cars (the perks) are just cars, of no import, in a parking lot, who knows where.

 

Supplied link is for examples of editorial shots made on the fly; not in a studio under ideal conditions. Note cropping, lighting, impact and dynamics of the various shots posted/supplied by the Getty Images distribution chain.

 

http://www.gettyimages.com/Editorial/Editorial.aspx

 

Hope the above is found helpful.

She was a gal, actually a pretty one :o) Thanks for the help.

SHE had cool shoes ;) he he

 

not funny ~ cool shoes all of them! HA

 

lol