Tuesday, a non-event? i think not

Hey i took this with my phone, and im pretty new to all this. I

havn't had very much experience at all. any suggestions?

Is it good for my level?

This doesn't work for me. The composition is confusing, the background distracting. Sorry, I do like the colors & the concept. But... for a cell phone it's a good start:)

Nope, doesn't work for me either. It isn't the quality, which is "cell phone," it's the fact that there's nothing to capture my interest, no story, nothing unsaid. This says "girlfriend with hoodie pulled down goofing in the doorway, captured with my cell phone, and over-processed in my photo software."

 

If that is your message, you were successful. If not, you missed the mark. Keep trying. Get a realer camera. Think about what you point it at.

 

 

I find the composition of the subject quite tight, and interesting: but, as the two critiques above have suggested, the background really does `stuff it all up`.

 

I also suggest you develop your talent with equipment at a level better than a cell phone, if that indeed what was used to capture this image.

 

Also a good basic photographic course would be of great benefit, I think.

 

WW