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Really beautiful

Hi, the lighting on the subjects face and shoulder looks fantastic. However, the shoulder looks turned just a little too much and slightly awkward or unnatural. Maybe if she put her shoulder down and facing forward with only the head turned it would look better. Otherwise great pic!

I see what Jagdeep is saying, but I have to say I like it the way it is - look realistic, not posed to me. She looks like she is going somewhere, and just turned back after being called. Her lips being pursed makes you feel she has been interrupted in something she has been thinking about. Great background.

 

I spent an hour trying to get some family shots yesterday - aaaggh. Frustrating and non-productive. I think I should invite you over to take them for me!!!

i love the expression she has here, the softness of the photo and the background is superb! the only thing i would done is cropped the bottom of the photo at her shoulders level.

I love this portrait. Great lighting. Her expression is beautiful.

a very pleasing portrait; I really like the lighting and skin tone. regards, cb :-)

Simona, this amazing photo looks highly retouched but what matters is the results, not the way they've been achieved. Edited of not, this image makes me want to look at it more and more - and that's the point of art. If you have used Photoshop, congratulations for the subtle work. If you haven't, then BRAVO, you show great control of your lighting, your equipment, and composition. I agree with John's comments but not with Zohar's - don't crop the shoulder!!!! The pink and green work well together, the sharpness is such it hurts and the girl's expression delightful and natural. My two critics are that maybe you have whitened the whites of her eyes a bit too much. And how about gently softening her (unattractive) neck lines a bit too? Please shoot more!

 

Beautiful color portrait. The facial light is excellent.

This is beautiful Simona, I love the soft of your lighting (is this natural lighting?). I have no critique for pose or composition...all in the right place. Regards, Erwin.

This photo is succed to capture her beautiful face...very beautiful indeed.

What a beautiful portrait with nice saturated colors and excellent lighting! You captured a momentary, a bit enigmatic expression, approving the immortalizing of her beauty and freshness by the camera- and your Art! Many traits of a high quality painting!

This photo is really, really GREAT! Fantastic!

Beautifully done with smooth silky texture, great light & colours.

Thank you for the useful and nice comments. I just wanted to say that the light is natural and the colours are sligthly enhanced using layers mode in photoshop.

simona

Everything technical is well executed, as I've been told to make a good portrait the good feeling between the photographer and the model is essential. and here we can sense it.

congratulations

Es una imagen llena de belleza y misterio. Enhorabuena!

Beautiful shot, Simona. I like the expression of her face and choosen angle, you captured her exceptional personality very well.regards,maria

A photographer's dream

Outstanding. I think that Alec sad it all. The only minor fault is the blond/brunet hair line which I eliminated.

thank you for the comment and the attachment, but she's so proud of her new hairstyle that I would never change it!

splendid portrait

 

I like the range in his hair and which is very original,

 

of course light, poses and colors is perfect

 

Excellent photo...and intriguing look from the woman-child model.....

 

Best regards

best so far. nice start

well done.best regads.