Kaylee looking out of window

My daughter Kaylee looking out of the window. I appreciate all

comments. Thanks!

--nice potrait, Ashley. Lighting is a little harsh- but overall , OK.

Nice one!!!

The harshness of the lighting is more than offset (at least to me) by the softness of her expression. Outstanding shot!

Ashley, really good, especially if this is your first try. If you want to reduce the harshness of the lighting a bit, try using a large reflector board to camera right to reflect some light into the shadow areas. You can then stop down a bit to darken the highlight areas and keep them from washing out, espcially on her right shoulder. In the end the shadows should turn out about the same. Good shot, though!

The photo is nice but it's a bit burned on the left.

It was overexposed...

Nice shot, but the film seems to be burned out in the bottom left corner (or is a matter of scanning?), and there's something wrong with the perspective: the camera should have been turned a few degrees clockwise, the extreme right wall must be inclinated, not the one behind the little girl. It should be lowered too, in my opinion, about a feet to reach about her height; now it looks (just a bit) like an adult looking at her from above and this is not right to me.

Personaly I realy like how bright it is on the left, because it makes the picture that more intresting to me.