Group of Bedouins children.

I have a question about composition on this photo. Do you think that

it is well balanced? What would you improve?

Please take a look at my other pictures in this folder and let me

know what do you think.

Thanks.

I would crop out the black shape on the right and the stones in the foreground. Focus on the interesting part - the children.

I understand the problems in shooting in places like this. Perhaps this was the longest lens you had, and the closest you could get. But, you need to crop this much tighter.

 

I see that you are framing the kids with the foreground blurs, but it does nothing to help the image. Crop out the lower horizontal blur, and crop in from the right to just behind the girl's head. Leave the left frame where it is. I think you'll find a great shot.

 

Bill Smith

News Shooter

crop the shadow on the right

Godd composition but, the black thing on the right shouldn't be there