dianadeaver 0 Posted July 21, 2007 I would like to know what you think. What could I have done better here? If there'ssomething you don't like about it feel free to share. I am looking for any kind od feedback. Link to comment
le_grand 0 Posted July 21, 2007 To start I must say that I'm not in potrait for know, but it would be great B/W shot. also using the Hight key technique. I would also light her face trow the glass with a focus beam. I all it is very nice Link to comment
ramz1 0 Posted July 21, 2007 nice light and tone, sexy, and portrais the model beautifully Link to comment
prabhas roy 0 Posted July 21, 2007 Its a good picture overall, but if you ask me to comment specifically... then I wish to know what do you wanted to show? If the breast is important then its a good composition and if you wanted to show the face and the expression then in my view there is some lack of light effect...hope you understand my point....Warm greetings... Link to comment
andersk 0 Posted July 21, 2007 I really like this image - the warm tones, and contrast between the crisp white shirt and the models skin. Composition is good, and her expression very serene - this is one for the wall, indeed. The light puts the emphasis on the breast, rather than the face - but that is of course a matter of what the idea was from the start? Personally I would had tried to reflect some soft light onto the face with a reflector screen, but that is a personal preference - it's a very good photo and deserves high credits.Keep up the excellent work... /Anders Link to comment
jeffl7 0 Posted July 22, 2007 Everything about this shot is sensual. The draping of the shirt, the water, the mystery around her face, her semi-exposed body. Beautifully done. Link to comment
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