Thirsty Morning

I would like to know what you think. What could I have done better

here? If there'ssomething you don't like about it feel free to

share. I am looking for any kind od feedback.

To start I must say that I'm not in potrait for know, but it would be great B/W shot. also using the Hight key technique. I would also light her face trow the glass with a focus beam. I all it is very nice

nice light and tone, sexy, and portrais the model beautifully

Its a good picture overall, but if you ask me to comment specifically... then I wish to know what do you wanted to show? If the breast is important then its a good composition and if you wanted to show the face and the expression then in my view there is some lack of light effect...hope you understand my point....Warm greetings...

I really like this image - the warm tones, and contrast between the crisp white shirt and the models skin. Composition is good, and her expression very serene - this is one for the wall, indeed. The light puts the emphasis on the breast, rather than the face - but that is of course a matter of what the idea was from the start?

 

Personally I would had tried to reflect some soft light onto the face with a reflector screen, but that is a personal preference - it's a very good photo and deserves high credits.Keep up the excellent work...

/Anders

Everything about this shot is sensual. The draping of the shirt, the water, the mystery around her face, her semi-exposed body. Beautifully done.