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Where is this?

Go ahead! Critiques are making me revise and improve all the time.

Thanks in advance! :-)

yeah, where is this? i don't know what to say, everything looks great.

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Hi Camelia,

You have a bunch of great shots in your portfolio but this one does not work as well for me. I like the DOF but find the foreground elements a bit distracting. The rock is central but just kind of there and the stump lacks definition to be a focal point. The foreground does not flow into the long DOF. you have achieved that much better in the St Helens shot with heather in the foreground. In that photo you combine an interesting foreground with DOF and it all flows together. In my opinion this shot might be better if shot from the point beyond the stump with just lake and St Helens view or up near that point closer to lake level with those rocks more well defined in the foreground.

Keep up the good work, Stan