inmymind 0 Posted June 26, 2007 I love how well you capture the skin tones. Nice work, as usual. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted June 26, 2007 Wow, there is a window and a naked lady. This must be art:) Yeah, she's pretty. The story ... is she trying to pick up a milk bottle straight from the window in the morning .. why does she look at the camera ... may be there is a bird .. why is she naked ... she must be French and sleep naked ... or perhaps she is escaping something .... nice cascades ... the hair matches nicely with the cascades ... the light is not too bad, abit flat may be ... the composition is horrible. Would this be a pleasant aesthetic experience if she was old, wrinkled, fat, sweaty. Must be so because it is a good photograph, I hear.No, really, it's not too bad. I kind of like it, which is almost an unheard comment from me to this particular - artist.:)))) Link to comment
pressuredbyphotons 5 Posted June 26, 2007 I like the way her hair matches the color of the wood. A shame that the right eye is covered by that one curl of hair. C'est la vie. My other nitpick is the lack of complete smoothness on her back, but then she is thin. Perhaps if she was less horizontal... A lovely image, it is difficult to critique such beauty. Link to comment
thomas_collins1 0 Posted June 27, 2007 A wonderful image of a very lovely woman. I like how her eye peaks out from underneath her locks of wild hair. A real treat! The birds on my windowsill certainly don't look like this. :-) Link to comment
mmene 0 Posted June 27, 2007 Amazing and stunning picture of a very beautiful girl in a very nice pose. Bravo John. Link to comment
john_cyr1 0 Posted June 27, 2007 1. The lighting is very effective and I think someone already commented on the skin tones being perfect and I'd agree. 2. I'm not really a fan of the composition. I think judging from your other photos that you aren't afraid to break traditional composition rules and for the most part it really works. What I don't necessarily like here is the framing of the shot that cuts out the top of the window in order to display the white wall below. The white wall is almost completely white, which is very distracting, almost as if the window were hanging in the air. I do really like the lines of the shutters leading you to the center, which is great though. I would have liked to see the top of the window I think. Although it's a very nice nude photo, my favorite part of it is her hair and how it shapes her face. Very interesting (almost lioness-like? in style and with how she is posed). Link to comment
sarahkane 0 Posted June 27, 2007 John, she's magnificent! Aside from the beautiful body, killer hair, and great pose, the lighting is beautiful. I love how her crisp curls cover her left eye, leaving only her right for us to stare into... wonderful! ~S~ Link to comment
eimages 0 Posted June 27, 2007 Exceptional, what more can I say. I love love her hair. Link to comment
JPPhoto1664880217 5 Posted June 27, 2007 Overall, I like this foto. However (as John Cyr said above), the white wall is somewhat distracting. The subject of this foto is the model's face, in particular her eyes, and the white wall pulls the viewer away from her face (IMHO). Jim Link to comment
John Peri 1,032 Posted June 28, 2007 Thanks Jim, I think you are right. I wonder actually if it doesn't work better in black and white, where the wall is less competitive .. Link to comment
vidisorin 0 Posted June 28, 2007 Unusual pose...indeed I don't see the reason/story behind it...there is none in fact.....just the play between photographer and model....if that's what defines her.....although I doubt it...;-).... All in all a beautiful image of a young beautiful girl... Best regards Drop by... Link to comment
JPPhoto1664880217 5 Posted June 28, 2007 I think the B&W works a little better. However, it has the disadvantage of not showing the hair color, which (for me) is a significant contributor to the overall "personality" of the foto. Link to comment
John Peri 1,032 Posted June 28, 2007 No special Story Sorin ... there can't be one every time ... :-) Thanks Jim, it is an interesting point regarding the hair colour which may add to the carefree candid nature of this photo. Link to comment
jlarson6130 0 Posted June 29, 2007 Beautiful model, Love the color and highlights in her hair. Link to comment
atanu_ghosh1 0 Posted July 1, 2007 Wow...this is a perfect composition...skin tones and colours...and the expressions...I like the B&W version, though... Link to comment
alecee 0 Posted July 5, 2007 The natural color tones and her exquisite features steals the show here even though it's not too revealing it's really erotic. Kudos to you John. Link to comment
arathon 0 Posted December 22, 2007 I prefer the color version .. i think it is outstanding ! Link to comment
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