Blech a kiss!

hmm, I think you may have focused on the wrong kid! I would have zoomed in tightly on the kid on the left, as he is doing your typical "I'm SO bored with taking photos" look. I think he steals the attention from who you actually focused on. I would say if the kid on the right is your main subject crop the other kid out as they don't really "need" each other in this shot. Also, I think you could really punch up (not literally) his face with some dodging and burning. Right now it looks very muddy and dark with not much highlight or shadows to speak of. You of course would have to go into PS to do it, but it may be worth it.

 

My two pennies. :)

 

Todd

it was just a grab shot before I had to whip back around. I wish I had reframed on the other kid, but alas, this is all I got. not sure it is worth the work on this one (though I practially live in PS these days) : ) thank you, tho.