Out of the pool

Please take a look and let me know what you think.

Thank You!

I think the eyes are what is throwing this picture off. The whites of her eyes are light blue and it doesnt really go well. Other than that the pose and the water drops on her arm and face make for a nice picture. Great pose as well.

... the whites of your eyes have turned the aquamarine color of the water in the pool ! Is that the message here, James ?

Under this assumption, my preference would have been for sharpest focus on the eyes / eyelashes, but these seem softer to me than the wet hair over her ear and the droplets of water on her shoulder. Maybe more DOF would be optimum, or as Julie suggests, take the eyes to B &amp W so the viewer's attention is less distracted from the droplets of water on her shoulder ?

Regards, --Jim.