Jessica edited

I edited according to feedback minus vignetting(shoot jpg shame one

me) Further guidance or comments welcome.

You did well. Much better than the original.

 

J3

Wonderful light and pose - I am wondering whether cropping out lower part of the grass improves the picture or not. The reason that the grass is in sharp focus distract me a little - I would also clone out the fence in the background. Good portrait - love it