Sin city lll

for critique

I fail to see a problem with it-Excellent job

Very nicely done.... Kim :o)

Interesting concept. Sort of a 1950's super hero comic book kind of image. Technically I think lightening the face so that the face becomes the focal point would improve the image. As it exists, the details of the left side of the model's face (image right, model left)are lost in shadow. When I look at the image I end up looking at her boobs and her belly button (excuse the vernacular, please) not her face. The shadowing of the hip and groin are neat ways to make the model look slimmer, and also to emphasize her pudenda without making it a blatant camel-toe. (again, please excuse the vernacular) Emphasizing by obscurring is a well proven technique used by both artists and women since the beginning of time. *G*

photo molto curata nei particolari molto bella

colore molto vivo bravo!!!!!!! ciao..alex from italy.............

Excellent idea Excellent execution

friggin sweet!

I don't see how anyone could give you a 3/3. Even a 4/4 is low. I agree about the face needing a little more light and the hair as well. Good job of matching the lighting direction with the buildings.