Jebamony 3 Posted April 5, 2007 Please take the time to Critique &or Comment on my attempt on landscape. Link to comment
javieramian 0 Posted April 5, 2007 I think this is a nice shot, but, if I may say, there is some room for improvement: The small branch on the right should be cropped off, cause it draws your eye to that corner. The land section could benefit from some extra contrast and a bit of saturation. And, finally, the detail in the sky is a bit burn. I'd suggest using "Shadows/Hgihlights" in photoshop to bring it back and maybe selecting the sky only and using "color balance" to boost the blue component. Oh, one last thing. I believe when shooting landscapes (as in everything, really), lightning is everything. I would have tried this shot at sunrise or sunset to use the mountain shadows as "depth markers". Other than that, composition and detail are quite good. Nice shot! Link to comment
scjones 0 Posted April 5, 2007 I agree with Javier, this is a pretty good comp. Just the use of better light would help. Its hard to shoot travel images in good light because it limits you to a few hours a day. and the rest is usually not very good for producing good images. Link to comment
jan_piller 0 Posted April 5, 2007 YOur first critique is bang on with this one. I agree with everything he says. I must add however that's it a fantastic perspective and you have shown the magnificnet vastness of the area - really spectacular! Good shot! Link to comment
Jebamony 3 Posted April 5, 2007 Javier, Steven & Jan ~ thank you so much for your honest and comprehensive comments. Link to comment
fotodaniella 0 Posted April 19, 2007 I?m now visiting some friend?s work...and I?m enjoying your very much :o). Wonderful view of the Canyon, Saludos, Daniella Link to comment
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