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Adelaide past Sunset ... please critique, thank you

Tony,

What a wonderful nightscape. The sunset here is really nice and I like the way the clouds are dark against the sky. however, I feel that the composition in this shot detracts from the overall image. I feel that the black at the top and bottom of the page dont really add to the photo and the horizon across the middle of your shot isn't the most interesting way you may have captured this nightime city. I do however like the way you've included the few lights on the outskirts where the city sort of disapears. Overall Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks Erika :) ... i fully agree with your comments and had the very same thoughts, but i posted the image as shot for various reasons ... lol ... and none of them make any sense. Your modification to the image is wonderful :)

this one I like even more. Yup... I like it a lot.