"Lauren Pin Up"

Hey guys tell me what you think. Planned this shoot for a long

time ;)

Why did you choose a red dress and a red background? the dress is totally lost against the background. Use PS to change the color of the background at least to a darker red.

actually depending on the monitor it actually stands out quite well, I printed them and it looks amazing. I mean there are polk a dots on the dress to, but some monitors dont even show that! thanks for the constructive criticism!

Yeah, on my monitor the dress is VERY close to the same color as the background, thought that was the idea, which could be cool too.

 

Good "pinup" style, I love 'em too

I like it. Good styling, good pose, good hair. Nice 50s feel. Only thing that troubles me is the invisible chair. Couldn't you have found a red one? ;()

actually had a red chair in some other shots! but this one was a black stool, and most pin up girls look like they are levitating ;)

Wow Woman in Red and Red in Woman :)

 

Biliana

I think it works well. Nice shot.

I am not a fan of all red. :( Teach them to keep the elbow, too much weight on it makes the hand look broken. The finger is cut because you took of the chair. The stockings and shoes are very good.

Actually the finger is gone beacuse the dress got bunched up, I would hardly photoshop the finger out? As for the locked elbows, she is not super woman, and the stool was rickety in her defence. LOL here I go defending the shot...its my child I guess.

I know I was hard on you, but I hope all is for the best and you will learn from my critiqes too. This is all about, right ?

fair enough! thanks for even checking the photo out! i have many ohter photos from this shoot that are much better, I just edited this one forst to get somethin on my webiste, cause i was getting alot of requests!