His Cigar and Him

i like the shot i think it says alot about the man however i felt that the crop wasnt as strong due to the way the cigar seems to lead into the centre of the image for no reason, i know that sounds like it makes no sense ( sorry i do go on abit) and i also felt the photo lent itself to a much more dramatica tonal choice whether in colour or in b&w see what you think to the edited version ive done its just an idea hope you dont mind though.