Urban (II)

comments/critiques appreciated. thanks!

Very nice mood, colors and composition!

Hi Nadia

 

Nice work, well done...

 

I do have some feedback regarding the composition which you may find helpful. For me the subject of this image is the church and the building next to it so I would crop it a bit tighter just to the right of the trees, removing about half of the long building on the right of the frame. Doing that would also reduce the amount of blank space, (most of the foreground and some of the sky), around the subject matter and make for a tighter, more interesting image.

 

I hope this is of some help to you.

 

regards

Mark Boyle

Are dreptate Mark dar partial..nici intr-un caz nu ar trebui ca grupul biserica si cladire sa apara pe mijloc. In rest poza e super mai ales inspiratia ta de a trage B/W.