Monika 2007

Great impact! Briljant use of DOF, and those eyes!

Wonderful job, Slawomir!

 

comments are welcome

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This is very nice and on first inspection I have little to say. Looking closer, I'm not sure about the lower left corner - it appears to have been digitally alterered to obscure details, and if so, I wonder if its congruent with the DOF evidenced elsewhere in the shot. Possibly a minor change in pose might have removed the need.

The photo is nice aesthetically, nice tone and light. My only comment would be that for someone in a boxing pose there feels like a lack of physical tension, as if she's just...posing. Might have been neat if she were tensed up, poised to strike? Though granted, that may not have been your intent.

to zdjęcie mi się bardziej podoba, choć nie wiem czy za mocno nie 'podkręciłeś' bieli oczu