PLEASE CRITIQUE!!!

All I ask is that you be honest, I can really use the help. Thanx in

advance!

was in edited? you state fuji 200 as the film, but that's a colour film, yes?

 

i like the shot. not always easy to get candid photos of children. you did well. good exposure and crop, imho

Just converted it from color to black and white, thats it! Thanx for your critique!!!

Kell

The flash is kind of obvious in this, but still it's a nice shot...good job.

...and this is always difficult when you are taking pictures of kids, congratulations! However, IMHO, this picture needed a little bit more environment information: for me the cropping is too tight. Additionally, the shadow on the wall is distracting and distorting the image: bummer! But again,all these "problems" are completely understandable when you are taking pictures of kids... thanks for posting!