howard_lipan 0 Posted September 27, 2006 Martin, There are two problematic yet easily corrected aspects to this photograph that you should be aware of: 1) Her skin tones are way off (I hate to say it, but the chalk-white skin appears like that of a corpse -- or a vampire in need of a blood fix); and 2) There is too much space to her left and that detail in the lower-left corner is counterproductive. Crop the left side and adjust for natural skin tones and you've got a winner. BTW she is a lovely model and has a wonderfully natural and relaxed presence. Link to comment
jongaus 0 Posted February 4, 2007 I like this! The light is good, and her posing is very attractive, as well as the colors. I also like your position of the model to the right within the frame. Link to comment
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