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satori

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I, too, like the mood. HOwever, haven't you applied a little bit too much blur on the left side of the man, compared to the bushes on the right? It seems a bit unbalances, but maybe it's just me eye.
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I agree about the blur, but I think the mood and composition are exquisite. It is a portrait of a man in the fall of his life, and has suggestions throughout that resonate this quality. Not only do we have the slightly stooped posture of the white haired man looking down in the foreground, but also there are shadowy people in the background who are in a similarly stooped repose (whether older people or not), and leafless branches that add to this quality. The tones you have used, muted, darker, contribute as well. Visually, the man's posture is similar to the shape of the trees on the left, nicely tieing them to each other. The sweep of background trees draws a line from the man to those trees as well and nicely fills up the space with a complimentary background that has very little clutter, allowing ups to focus on the key elements. Very enjoyable.
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I concentrate more on photographed scene than quality. It looks really good. A man standing little bit on side. An old man, while life is going on behind him. Just the bacground right next to his head is distructin and could be composed a bit different. Very symbolic photo. Great work.
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Interesting work. Perhaps, catching the moment of a walking man a moment before (when he was still in the ally, between the working men and the fence on the right) could be more successful for the photo. But the mood here is wonderful, the photo has a feel. Nice.
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