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I would be thankful for ctitique.

I would like to see a little more detail in the rightside of her forehead it seems a little washed out to me. Also I think there it might be better composed if there was no neck showing at all instead if just a little bit. It is kind of distracting. Over all I find this interesting and I would love to see the original.

I like this - the fore head is a bit bleached possibly flash not bounced correctly, Her name's not Lily is it ;-)

Great and unexpected. My only compliant is the hot spot on her forehead and hairline. Otherwise, brilliant.