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nice lighting, nice composition. background tones are light and not distracting.

couple of things, well three actually:

- there are a couple of reflections on her dress that look sort of like dust (i know they're not). they could use a little burning in to darken them, make them less distracting.

- her lipstick is the wrong color. or perhaps you used a red filter? either way her lips are too light and look a little funny. just a tad darker and i wouldn't have noticed.

- she's doing 'crunches'. she's holding her head up and it shows...she doesn't look quite comfortable.

- and one more thing. the shadow behind her head looks a little odd. could have used a slave flash around the side perhaps.

it's a very sophisticated image, the model looks very regal. overall nice job, just work with the model a little bit more to make sure she looks natural. a tough thing to do in the middle of a shoot i'm sure!