another bug

This is a repost of an older pic . I like this new post better - please tell me what you think.

The things I changed from the older post :

1) Flipped the picture horizontally

2) Rescanned the picture

3) Corrected the colors

4) Cropped the picture

 

The older pic is still in my folder

 

Please comment and rate

if you don't like this pic (or youre just in a bad mood) and you want to give it a 5 (or less) leave a comment so I can understand your rating

 

It is quite improved, to my opinion mostly due to the better light. Very attractive picture. Jean

I agree with the previous poster. The lighting is better, but the biggest improvement in on focus IMO. Since the bug appears to be in sharp focus on this one, and not the last, the slide was probably not flat the last time it was scanned. This looks like a much better job technically from the scan, to the photoshop, to the final product. I really like the composition too! Except for the yellow blob to the right of your name (which pulls my eye like a magnet away from the subject) I don't see any other problems with it. You might try cloning out the yellow blob and see how that works. Nice folder.

 

-Jason

Interesting one, good composition.

This ones amazing it reminds me of the start of "a bugs life" the movie

I agree, much improved. Very nice Picture.

This picture is too funny.

Wonderful composition and light. The bug being sharp with the leaf being partially soft really makes this stand out.

and to Jason Neymeyer - I did as you said ...

thanks

really, much better. the photo was really nice, now it's great. i can't help smiling at this bug ;)

Excellent lighting, and the picture is sharp at jut the right spot. Nice job.

Excellent ! a good demonstration that an ugly bug can give a wonderful image, haha !

Composition is cool!I like the body shadow seperate like that.Improvements?Get in abit closer to the bug?dunno.The whole photo could be at least a stop brighter though-can't quite see the bugs face properly.overall though different & good!