Pleasureland was a public swimming pool in Oakland, NJ that closed about seventeen years ago after a drug related gun battle killed four and wounded thirty. It never reopened, and still sits unused and decaying.

Pleasureland was a public swimming pool in Oakland, NJ that

closed about seventeen years ago after a drug related gun battle

killed four and wounded thirty. It never reopened, and still sits

unused and decaying.

I don't really like the pole in the foreground. Although it shows the decay effectively, it's placement seems awkward. The contrast seems too high as there's barely any detail left in the trees.

Perhaps you could include the text you added to your photocritique posting to the image itself, so it would be more clear what this image is about.