1st session; 60 Min. with Miss A.S. (Fashion/Glamour/Portrait/Fine Art/Casual)

1st session; 60 Min. with Miss A.S. (Fashion/Glamour/Portrait/Fine

Art/Casual)

This is what I do with it. I'm best at making a change and showing you.

Thank you but you just have simplified and eliminated the geometric lines which were part of the original composition.

This way we get an easier image but it would be rather a mediocre concept with clean exposure and focus.

I was not after that. I was trying to frame the head between the two middle white lines and the third white line on the left is almost parallel to the scratch on the ground on the right. The texture of the ground hopefully keeps it organic.

 

Thank you again.

I don't agree with Roberts' suggestion . The lines in the background combined with the angle is what make the composition so interesting and unique . I think it's beautiful , wouldn't change a thing . Great work

I seem to be rather bad at removing elements that others use to frame the image. I removed the mike booms from a BB King photo that the photograher used in the same way to frame the picture as you did. I've done this a lot with my own photos. I like to isolate the subject or contrast it strongly with the background, which is another way of isolating I guess.

 

Ask 10 photographers on what makes a good image and you get 11 answers.