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all critique welcome...thanks

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I like the shot. the model, her body language...expression is all very good.

welld done!

Great composition, great model expresion, great light, great photo !

Editorial, glamour and fashion in one great shot.

Kajka is very pretty model :)

que suavidad de luz tiene en la cara y cuerpo , muchas felicidades , por esta fotografias.

saludos desde mexico

It doesn't look spontaneous, but then again maybe you didn't want it to. Quite good composition. I must say though, this girl is really gorgeous... hope she's not your daughter! hehe... I love her motorcycle jacket, tell her if she wants to take a ride on my bike she's welcome anytime!

This is good work. It is interesting that the background is washed out, something that is considered a no-no, usually. I would like to see some different crops to reduce the size of that upper right corner. Maybe darken it?

I like so much this picture. I thinck that de girl is amazing and the light too.

Congratulations!

great composition...

La foto esta bien me gusta, interesante, bien balanceada, lo meor la mirada en el objetivo. La modelo es tremenda, no tiene desperdicio, desafiante....

allmost perfect picture. love the expression on her face, gives confident an her actions. not perfect because of that inclined wall

Wonderful photo! She is just a little pissed, maybe? I think she is listening to the answer to her question, "OK, Where the hell are you?! And this better be good!!" And yes she is really beautiful!

her whole series. Nicely done. Man I have a lot to learn!

Great Photo, Its very crisp and fresh.

I really love this picture and not just because the model is cute (which she clearly is).

 

The attitude in her face is fantastic. Having the background burnt out is great, makes the model and phone jump right out at you. I might have been tempted to burn out the top right darker region slightly to reduce it's pull on my eye, but other than that I can not knock it.

 

Well done.

 

 

Her parents must be proud...

Cool expression...

I like the space in the upper right hand corner. The contrast between the washed out area here and the focal point (the girl's eyes) is interesting. Her expression is perfect.

model is very nice and has good expression. But, I can't see over-exposed background, what is really disturbing, and uneven vertical line of the wall. White backround would be ok, if there is no elements... Thanks for understanding.