Friend in Kimono

I can't get just the right title for this peice. I have one main theme

I am trying to convey with this, which I am purposely not telling you.

If you could please leave any comments on the image, plus any title

suggestions, it is appreciated.

 

Thanks

-Zach

Before I saw the larger version and the title, It gave me a sense that it was japanese in an atmosphere of serenity. The two elements on the left subtract from that serenity - at least for me. Good work.

I love this photograph. I cannot detect A theme -- I see a girl, I see a beautiful red kimono, I see religion and art and the drama of the body's involvement in both. I wish there were a mark on the paper. I see (structurally) a kind of swirl that begins at her right hand goes up the arm and across her shoulders down her left art and along a line formed by the left hand, the right hand, the ink and the little (glass?) piece, this last paralleled by the way the kimono hem is lying. And that's it. But that is certainly enough.