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I'm not sure is this photo for Portraits category or for this one, but

I'd like to read some words from You about the impression.

Good control over all parameters technical. Can't expect lousy pic from medium format, and it's not. Composition is well set. At the same time, it's the umpty hundredth crowd hungry nude pic I am seeing so far. Nothing wrong with that either. Solid work, it's just ain't my ball game. 6/5

Ivan,

Beautiful girl. Great skin tone. I do think her eyes could be a little sharper. I would like to see catch lights in her eyes. The contrast is very good. There is detail in your whites and blacks -- very nice. I love her expression and the eye contact with the camera (viewer).

I think there should be more room above her. It wouldn't work to crop off the bottom, but she is too close to the top. The rule of thirds doesn't always work for a portrait. Your background is nicely out of focus.

It bothers me a little that her hand is cut off. It would have been better without her hand or better yet, to include more of her left arm.

Very nice shot,

Mark