Atmospher

Was taken at the coffee shop of the art center in the city.

 

Thanks for your thoughts, Pnina

Thanks for your comments, Pnina

Pnina, I like the atmosphere the light in the background creates and the silhouette of the girl. What is distracting, imo, are the chairs and tables. have you considered cloning them out?

This is well done Pnina. I kind of agree with the comment re. the tables etc but I realise it was probably a dynamic kind of shot. I think maybe if the door way to the left was removed it would increase the atmosphere of the scene. The fact that the girl's face is only just distinguishable is perfect for the mood of the photo. I like the warmth of the image too.

Thanks for your comments.

 

Paula, as Mike stated it was a dynamic take in a coffee shop, so the table and chairs are a part of it. I did not want to clone it out because I think it is a part of the atmospher.

 

Mike, you may be right about the cropping of the left side, I'm uploading the cropped version. do you think it enhances the image?

Animated still life. Special!

For me this works much better Pnina. There is better focus on the subject and more focus on the theme of the image.

I like this. The chairs do not bother me as they are part of this cafe. We can clone out anything these days...but then we are losing something, making the photo fake. The idea is great and this is a dramatic shot. I bet you could go back and take more photos if you want. You could crop-darken the chair area a bit, crop out the light... but nice as is. (I am commenting more on the other comments.)

Excellent composition and light, make this image have a special ambience.

Daily, for a nice comment.

 

Mike, thanks for comming again, I think that both forms are good, I'm glad the second works for you.

 

Sarah, you are right , I can go again, but I like it as is and the cropped one as well.

 

Amal, thanks for your always nice comments.

Hi Pnina, as with 99% of the grab shots on here we could nit pik this to death, of which I am as guilty of doing as anyone. I think either version stands the test very well, yet I do prefer the tighter crop.....Jim

Hi Pnina :)...I like both for different reasons, one being what Sarah states, the other it seems to make it more of a statement...but it's a very cool shot either way!

Cool. The exposure is spot on with subtle hints of shades.

great job on the exposure, nice mood.

Jim, each of ua have his preferences, yours is good as any other.

 

Peta, I'm glad to know you are still there....

 

Alec and Klaus, to both of you.

Yes, i love the light here,a strong image,well done Pnina,regards

 

Shuki

Very nice atmosphere!

intimate !

beautiful atmosphere and model Pnina, and interesting distribution of light! Lovely.

Belleza a contraluz, color y un bello encuadre, saludos cordiales Pnina.

Awesome, intelligent work, dear Pnina.

Pnina,I like how you look through the door and pass by the lady without ignoring her with that fine trim of light.attractive composition.

Pnina, really nice work but I like the cropped version more.

Pnina, I am in agreement with those who favor the cropped version. Your image captures this interior wonderfully. The interior also refers here to the mind illuminated with the beauty of this art. Well done Pnina, most enjoyable.

I Love this alot. Maybe it's the colours and because it is backlit... I am not sure! Very well done Pnina. Very nice. Love this. Regards, Kelvin.