Bluey

This series were taken in an improvised studio. I used two softboxesbut was rather limited by the width of the place.

Any comments will be truly appreciated.

Luis Lacerda

Hopefully these comments will be helpful. First, it is important to have some stronger highlights in the eyes. I see a very slight amount, which suggests that your light box is quite a distance a way. I would raise it so that the catchlight in the eyes is a little higher. I would position the box closer as well, to bring more light on to the subjects face. The brightest spot in the photograph, is just to the left of her armpit. Secondly, I would like to see some separation, using light, from the background. Either place a light right behind her, or rim light her with one of the soft boxes. Size of studio should never be a factor. Right now the shot seems to have more lighting problems than exposure.