a Glasgow street

This is my friend Raz.

I shoot this on a typical Glasgow night. This is totally orchestrated and we had to wait quite a while for the cab (taxi).

I love this shoot because it conveys the feeling of the place where it was shoot.

Please tell me what you think.

By the way the original slide has a bit more detail .

 

itai

Interesting Light and composition!

 

Daniel

I find the triangle of total darkness in the left very distracting. I am not sure you want to crop it though...

Would like to see a bit more of the silouhette of the person. His head just dissapears into the blackness at the top.

 

The light on the wet sidewalk is nice -

 

cheers,

Luc

I really like the light and the color. However, I can barely see the man, and I can't tell that the headlights are a taxi cab. Maybe it's my cheap monitor. I think this would work better if the man was closer to the camera and had a more distinctive silhuette.

I can see why this is one of your personal favorites. I love the gold light shimmering on the wet surfaces. Although I like the way the light leads into the photo from the left corner, I believe that it does emphasize the subject matter more to crop out the dark triangle on the left side. The photo does seem to have two competing points of interest the shadowy figure of the man and the taxi cab. Rather than cropping out the triangle, try cropping out the taxi and leave the light leading to the shadowy figure and see what you think.

Mysterious light and composition. I love this photo.

Great light and color...

Great use of light and contrast! Very impressive!

The golden sheen on the ground really draws you in and captures attention. There are about a thousand different ways you could crop this, but I think it is fine the way it is.

I like the colour of the wet street.

Hi Itai,Congrats for your very nice portfolio. I realy like this one...and many thanks for your comment, it was very interesting for me. Please continue your critiques:) Cheers