mohsens 0 Posted April 18, 2006 That gray thing on top right would not be there. I think you would better cut it out. Link to comment
pjmeade 12 Posted April 18, 2006 Hello, the two fashion images look fun. I would like to try shooting a catwalk, just to see what it's like. I can understand why the critique above wanted the bottom of the grey banner taken out, I had wondered about a more severe crop. What do you think? It may be better without trying to burn out the video camera, I'm not quite sure. Very best wishes. Pete Link to comment
chips2 0 Posted April 19, 2006 Pete Nice crop... Thanks ! My first try at catwalk.Went late and the best place was taken .But it was fun. Link to comment
alexandra rauh 0 Posted April 19, 2006 I like the closeup too,nice move and very beautiful and sweet. Link to comment
j_m_lee_photography 0 Posted April 19, 2006 Can see all the BUAYA behind. lol Good shot! CHiPs. I also prefer the cropping. at least I am not distracted by the background. Link to comment
stilfoto 0 Posted April 19, 2006 I actually like your original picture a lot better than the cropped version. Much more life in that one. My suggestion would be to maybe blur the background a little more than it already is, but besides that leave it as it is. Link to comment
sondra kick 0 Posted April 19, 2006 CHiPs, your photos are always a joy to look at. In this case I do like the major crop better than the original. Sondra Link to comment
kaushikphotography 0 Posted April 19, 2006 A tender touch of elegance. Soft and rich. lovely shoot. Link to comment
cherlyn 1 Posted April 20, 2006 Never ask me to go along, huh! The crop version is good making it look more like a portrait shot. Yours with all the people looking on let people know that this is a fashion catwalk show, but crop off the top gray part will be good. Now American time is still 19th Apr, so HAPPY BIRTHDAY , dear Friend. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted April 20, 2006 I think the tight crop suggested would be too boring of an image. Your original photo is better as it shows all the action of the photographers and spectators. It has a more dramatic feel to it. Just crop of the top as suggested. Where were you standing? Looks like you were on the other side of the catwalk. Anyway, happy belated birthday. Cheers! By the way, glad you like my model photos, I have more posted so do visit sometime. Link to comment
dk. 0 Posted April 20, 2006 Good action shot CHiPs, I think I would just lose the grey banner on top too, hopefully it does not make the picture look to cropped to her head though, if this is already a crop I think I might like just a wee bit more of her legs and the faces of the guys taking pictures behind her. Take care friend. If it was your birthday happy belated birthday. :o) DK. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted April 21, 2006 Hi Chipsy, I like your original as the photographers are giving it a context. "Pure Milk".... and belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Pnina Link to comment
mari_mar 0 Posted April 21, 2006 Very nice, Chips, love her smile, good capture! Happy belated birthday, amigo!!! Link to comment
paula grenside 0 Posted April 22, 2006 Chips, late but sincere wishes for your birthday! Nice shot here; I'd keep the background that shows what is happening, love all the visible cameras. Link to comment
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