baerbel 0 Posted March 13, 2006 Great double portrait. Love it! My only suggestion would be to crop it a little more on top. 6/7 Link to comment
haleh b 0 Posted March 13, 2006 Those eyes are drawing me into their world! I like how you have emphasized on the eyes and not so much of the "Ink". One tiny suggestion I have is including the younger person's full arm in the frame for the sake of uniformity. Link to comment
ash1 0 Posted March 13, 2006 hey man, I like this. very interesting. you nailed it man. I totally agree with the comments above. This required some cropping from top and left. Rest is simply super. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 14, 2006 Really beautiful image. Contrast works here. I wish the boys arm and the mans head were fully in picture though. Bleeding off edges like this, compositionally give the picture a contrived, too planed look. The expressions hold our attention and define the work. Link to comment
dr 0 Posted March 17, 2006 thanks all... For me, the cut and composition works as it is as I like the balance/harmony overall. ; ) > Link to comment
leitner1 2 Posted March 31, 2006 It is good as is !! Simple and Perfect Eyes are talking to me ! Link to comment
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