Night Take off

The idea of catching the lights of the plane on a long-exposure is a good one, but this photo (for me) lacks interest. It's also a little weird that the lights start and stop. If you could re-frame the picture in a more interesting way (more foreground?) and have the lights go through the whole frame (preferably not vertically or horizontally, but at an angle) I think you'd have a great picture with a lot of impact.

That's my opinion, anyway...