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comments and ratings appreciated.

I like the color contrast between the red / orange of the cafe and the blue of the side street. But in my opinion it lacks the spark, a center of attention. There is nothing that attrackts my eye, it just restlessly keeps wandering over the image. How perfect would it be if there was a person looking out through one of the windows at the top? Oh well, it was not meant to be. But nice shot.

I think this shot could work if you experimented with the angles and perspective a bit. I do like the lighting of the cafe immensely, but the Tabac sign drags my eyes off into the empty sky and leaves me wondering why the sky is still so light and blue when the street seems so much more dusky.