Dreamy girl with swinging hair

Please let me know your suggestions to improve this. It was an awful

exposure that I corrected in PS and added some 'dreamy' qualities to

in order to emphasize the girl's comptemplative moment.

Pretty girl and a good idea but this doesn't work for me. I think it would be better if her eyes were fully closed. I would have taken quite a few shots so that I had more to choose from, also I don't think the lighting is helping here, it's much too broad and makes her face look flat, the only modelling is on her left cheek and is so narrow as to be almost non existant, sorry to be so negative, you've got some good ideas, please keep trying. Best wishes, Derek

I agree with derek. Not much about this photo is working for me. It's as if she was caught at an ackward moment with her eyes close. It somewhat blurry and the overall image is flat.