people and portraits Aka

Does this work?

Does not work for me, sorry. Feels awkward.

 

Then again, I did take a closer look at the shot so it certainly draws the eye.

 

Apart from the missing eyes, what's up with the noise? Was that on purpose?

 

Regards,

 

Tom

This is a very intent image. And as a portrait it may work for it defines a personality, and a strong one at it. It could be technically better, but then everything can be better or bettered...